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My world is right,
yet so wrong.
My life is complete,
yet it's not.
My happiness fades away.
My depression returns.
My life falls into place.
My life falls apart once more.
My smile fades,
replaced by a blank expression.
I was saved,
yet I am still lost.
I haven't written anything in a while but I felt inspired last night. Any one who watches me has probably noticed the re- occuring theme in my poems of feeling lost and alone. This one's about how my life has finnaly started to get better again, but only when I'm at school or some place else with my boyfriend. That's what the positive lines are, how I feel when I'm with him. The negitive lines are the way I feel when I leave him and return home.
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sakurablossom17 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
Thats why you have friends! When you feel alone just call us and we'll be by your side!! Great job though :D
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narutorox2 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008
thanks
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sakurablossom17 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2008
welcome as always
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